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I hate Alternators

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They're so awesome looking. So awesome that they're a pain to draw. The bot in front took me freakin forever to pencil. This is one of the panels from a fan-comic I'm working on.

The only problem I have with it is with the extreme close up of the bot infront makes it hard to read where his body parts are. Coloring should fix that. Anyhoo top-left to down-right.

It's a panel from a fan comic I'm working on. First 2 pages can be seen here. [link]


Crackerjack the little bot flying.

Airlift the big bot in the back.

Quartz by Drivarrr
little bot in the corner is Gizmometer created by San Holo

the Fembot with the tire-boobs

Alternator Trailbreaker- mine

Specail Agent Alice (token human)- she's so mine :XD:


Inks can be found here: [link]
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heey rob

this is looking pretty ambitious dude.

the first thing that stands out to me is the empty rectangles that you have in the corners of the picture. i'm not sure if they're for narrative, or logos or whatever, but they seem to be cutting off some of the characters a little awkwardly. especially the top left one that's creating a tangent with trailbreaker's shoulder. i might also want to watch out for some of the perspective issues you have with your tfs. things like the exhaust above tb's head and his right forearm need to be tightened up before going to inks. remember that parallel lines converge as they go further away. the two lines that make up his forearm on the left seem to be moving away from eachother as you go further down it. same goes with the perspective in the background. make sure the lines are converging in perspective.

looking forward to see how this turns out dude.